vox nihili

I've got a piece I'd love a review on. A Living Nightmare..it's kind of..well, I don't know what it is, exactly. It isn't complete yet, but I'm working on it.... ...

Wow. When you said it was a romance, I didn't think it would start out like that. But I don't know anything about romances. Really catchy, though. I'm hooked. "My ...

Cool! I loved the whole thing, and until the last line, I wondered: where is the cheese? Exactly how does cheese attack, though? It's a really good poem. What would ...

Good job! Very nice poem. I love the way you established the stanzas. But some spelling errors: "From a whirl wind of pain" Whirlwind is one word. "Or that I ...

Can you imagine? Being trapped- In your own mind? Thoughts, attacking everything you know and believe- Raining down like hail In a maelstrom of angry clouds? A monster within, Whom ...

I have a crime story that I need a title for. I originally called it Nightmare, but that's starting to sound kind of cheesy-and it doesn't describe the themes very ...

Thanks for reviewing! Especially the spelling of anesthesia. I couldn't find it on spell check. I'll be sure to add more details-I usually ham it up with almost poetic descriptions.

I thought it did sound a little like the stuff I write when I've got the temptation to blow somebody off. And the thing is, it always works: glad you ...

"as I descent gracefully" descent is a noun. You can't do an object. descend is the proper verb. "I want out, away from confusion, away from a cluttered mind, away ...

Thanks for reviewing. :)

“MOM! MOOOMMM! COME HERE! MOOOOMMMYYYY!” screeched the nine year old Jimena whom knelt on the sidewalk in front of her Manhattan home. Mrs. Poleski ran down the sidewalk, nearly tripping ...

Thanks for reviewing. :) It made me smile reading your comments. I love using words and I love info-thus the reference to the US indianapolis.

Cool. It sounds about right. I got inspiration for a story by listening to songs too. One was about a guy who had somehow lost his wife/girlfriend. Another was about ...

I would recommend the following: Al Capone Does My Shirts by: Gennifer Choldenko Maximum Ride the Angel Expeirement by: James Patterson (it's a series, and be forewarned-very addicting.) The Harry ...

Yah. This is a pretty gross poem. But exciting too. I'm about to eat supper...eeww. And I visualized this taking place in my kitchen.... Anyway, you've got some punctuation problems: ...